人的记忆力会随着岁月的流逝而衰退，写作可以弥补记忆的不足，将曾经的人生经历和感悟记录下来，也便于保存一份美好的回忆。范文书写有哪些要求呢？我们怎样才能写好一篇范文呢？下面我给大家整理了一些优秀范文，希望能够帮助到大家，我们一起来看一看吧。
上海英语教学改革篇一
近日，2014年高考改革的消息一直不绝于耳，语法部分的变动是板上钉钉的定论------取消选择题，替换为语法填空题。
下面，请大家先看一下2013年3月份左右高考考试院内部发布的2014年语法新题型的样题，牛刀小试一下：
directions: read the following some blanks, there is a word given in the in each of these blanks with the proper the given in the other blanks with words that are correct in structure and proper in is a photo hanging above my er i look at that photograph, it takes me back to those early years __1__ everynew experience was important for was towards the end of the school year __2__ it happened.i had been looking forward to that day with such eagerness.i can still remember the shouts of the spectators as i __3__(go)out onto the sports field with my days __4__(early), i had qualified for the finals of the 100 looking around, i was determined __5__(win).…
请大家对对答案：
win
众所周知，高考英语的语法题型多年来一直以单项选择的传统题型来考查，2014年将全面取消语法选择题（16题*1分=16分），替换为新题型：语法填空（见以上样题），2个语篇，共15道题（15分）。
通过样题，我们可以发现新题型语法填空的形式，基本可以分为两种，提供提示词的和没有提示词的。前者的考察点在于，以提示词的适当形式填空；后者则以连接词、或代词、冠词、介词、固定搭配等为考察点。
相较语法选择题，鉴于没有可供排除的选项，故新题型的难度相对较高，需要考生有一个扎实的语法基础，方可游刃有余的应对此题型。虽然2014年的考生大部分都花了十几年的时间来训练选择题，对选择题的题型及应试技巧烂熟于心，但是在考纲未发生重大变化的前提下，“万变不离其宗”，纵然题型有变，但是主考的语法点并未发生变化。只要考生对语法的基本知识有系统的掌握，加之多年选择题的大量操练，一样可以应对新题型，无需感到紧张不安。
上海英语教学改革篇二
2014年上海中考英语改革解析——首字母
★字母section 解题秘籍
▲答题步骤：
– 阅读全文（粗读和细读）
– 判断所缺单词词性
– 填出使文章完整通顺的单词
– 检查所填单词的数和时态
▲解题重点：
– 词性（尤其是长句）；
– 上下文；
– 固定搭配
– 积累高频词汇；复查语法
▲注意事项： 会判断词性，具备分析句子的结构和成分能力 2 关注细节（时态，语态，人称，名词单复数，形容词副词的级）
3一般全文中5-6个单词相对比较简单，可顺利填出 要学会猜测单词，不留空格 不要在一时拿不定主意的词上纠缠
▲解题难点：
考纲词汇生僻或冷门词汇；
一词多义的词；
实战秘籍揭示：
1.关注特征题目
i.具特征：l_____, h_____, s______, b______,a____........，……....或t___......,…...(前后半句有反意的信息)果断填写
（13普陀）it was quite difficult, and i had to study very hard.l 88 , i got a good mark in the exam in the end.(13浦东一模)h __90__ , ross anderson, a computer security engineer at the university of cambridge, thinks the i_ _91__ could put microsoft in big trouble.(13浦东二模)it’s not easy for us to forgive(原谅)someone who has ever hurt you or made you disappointed.h 86 , several new studies say that it could be good for your health.(11上海)b____96____, you need to make up a story.（13长宁）a___87___ he had not seen it for more than 20 years, he recognized it immediately.（13奉贤）a____89____ the internet has made our world better in many ways, in some ways it can be a bad .具特征much/even______ … than… 加形容词比较级
（13奉贤）the internet makes it much e____86____ for people to search for information.（13松江）“goods online are often much c _ also saves me a lot of time.(13杨浦)some pop groups find that m 86 people listen to their songs on their mobile phones than they do on many people have mobile phones that sometimes you don’t know when your phone rings.（13杨浦二模）when there is only one parent, of course the responsibilities of looking after the children are much h____89____ for him or .具特征w______ doing i______ of doing(13崇明)you will be able to review your teacher’s lecture w___92___ even getting online again.（崇明二模）one family in the uk went “back in time” to see what life was like w 96 having all the modern .具特征w______ a or b e______ a or b（中考模拟）in this way, they could find out w_______ the stranger was a friend or an enemy.（13闸北二模）in all, 50% of wayview students get to school in a vehicle, e 88 the bus or a car.v.关注转折词 in fact, but, however 一般前后意思相反
（崇明二模）“life is speeding ne is becoming unwell.” this may sound like something someone would say t in fact, an unknown person who lived in rome in ad 53 wrote .具颠覆整句句意的词：h____, s_____, r_____(中考模拟)80% british people who take part in the survey feel that their neighbours h_____ pay attention to others’ feelings.（12徐汇）“i don’t see what’s so interesting about these streets are too narrow---i could h___91___ drive my car down them.(12静安)at home, girls learned washing, cooking, dancing, and the basics of taking care of a children s 91 attended school.（13虹口二模）i like driving, just out of ’s lucky that i s________ drive without a i can earn three or four thousand yuan a month .具修饰整句子的副词: r_____, e_____(中考模拟)but have all these developments r 93 improved the quality of our lives?(12浦东)nobody knows e 88 how many hutongs there are in nowadays beijing.2.注意平行结构
a and b 特点 1词性相同 ii意思相近or 相反
变式：逗号, or, but, better than, rather than, from a to b（13普陀）i got on the plane with ten other took off from the runway and c 90 higher and higher.（13奉贤）but remember to use the internet p____92____ and wisely.（13崇明）in an online classroom your teacher’s lecture is written rather than s___88_____.(12上海)cycling with a large guided group is better than r____92 ____ alone.(12 黄浦)later, i knew an exam was a kind of competitions, there are always w 90 and losers.（13浦东一模）microsoft is developing a new software that could accurately guess your name, your age, your s 87 and possibly even your location.（11杨浦）“don’t throw out your o 93 running are better than modern ones,” the study suggests.（13浦东二模）they also have fewer headaches, l 90 blood pressure(血压), and fewer problems on sleeping.(12宝山)it has one hundred and three levels and six thousand five hundred rs can ride in one of seventy-three elevators that take them from the b__87__ to very near the top of the of these elevators are very fast, reaching the eightieth floor in only forty-five seconds.3．合理判断词性(动词注意时态，名词注意单复数)★名词
（12浦东）but if we connected all the hutongs together, their total l 89 would even be longerthan the famous great wall, which is about 4,000 miles.（13静安二模）you can even look on the internet at sites such as you can have an e 92 of things you have for something else that you would like to have.★形容词
（13普陀）my parents visited space last year, but i was too y 86 to go with them.i admit that for a few seconds i felt a little n 91 when i sat in the space shuttle.（12静安）in the renaissance period(文艺复兴时期)(1500-1650), people became interested in higher wanted to learn the a 86 languages such as greek and latin – languages that were used in the old times, and study mathematics, science, and so universities were set up during the 16th century.(11静安)don’t feel ’s not your fault（过错）!being bullied can make you feel very l 93___ and angry, but you are not alone.（13闵行二模）in the northeast and middle west, it is very hot at some times and very cold at other in these states have more heart trouble because of the c____86____ weather in february or march.（13闵行二模）low air pressure(压力)may make people leave more bags on buses and in shops on low air pressure days.(12徐汇)“it’s really s___87___---we’re in the middle of one of the biggest cities in the world, but in these hutongs it feels as if we are in a village in the countryside.★动词原形or一.过
（13松江一模）“middle school students should pay more attention to their ing for things w 92 their time.”
（13闸北一模）many online stores o 87 abig discount(打折)and free delivery service.(13浦东二模)on the other hand, studies p 87 that something like anger can change you（12静安二模）university education was a privilege(特权)of the were not allowed to attend and poor people could not a 87 to go.★动词过去分词（被动语态）特征：be动词+v(p.p)+(by)（13松江二模）beyond supermarkets, barcodes are n 89 everywhere: for renting cars, for luggage checks on a plane, for parcels you send;（13闵行二模）are you feeling sad, tired, unhappy or hard to remember things today? if you have one of the above feelings, it may be c____92____ by weather because weather influences people’s health, intelligence and feelings.（12黄浦二模）in africa, when an antelope(羚羊)wakes up every morning, the first thing it thinks about is, “i must be able to run faster than the fastest lion, or i will be k 86.”（12静安二模）he might study at different universities and since(既然)the teaching was all d 88 inlatin, it didn’t matter(v.= be important)which country he studied in.（13长宁二模）in many countries, oral storytelling is still important, but in most countries now, stories are written down and p 88 in books.★副词
（13长宁）the package consisted of a long, narrow box, c___86___wrapped(包装)in brown paper.（13闸北）young students are e 91 attracted by advertisements on the internet and buy things they don’t need.★疑问词
（13闸北）“i like eating duck neck very much and i often buy it on taobao from shops in ’s much more delicious than w 90 our local stores sell.”
（13杨浦）now you can have a different sound for every person you address book is used to find out w 91 is calling.（12松江）now speaking the foreign language is w 87 most people want.4.注意固定搭配
pay a_____ to 关注 f_______ on an interesting person 关注一个有趣的人
a_____ wine to the recipe 把红酒加入菜谱
by h______用手写 be on s_____ 大甩卖 to my s_______ 让我吃惊的是
be so d_____ from 与…如此不同 be the s______ as 与…相同
it o us good opportunities to meet people from other countries, learn about their c_____ and c_______.它给我们提供和其他国家人见面，学习他们的文化和习俗的好机会
in p_____ 在公众场合 financially i________ 经济独立
have no i______ in following fashion 对追逐时尚不感兴趣—> show great i_____ in…
be l_____ / c_____ to … 连接到。。b____,= in a_____, 除此之外 b_____ a and b 在两者之间 l______ traffic 交通通畅
be n_____ about 对。。紧张 he feels so f______ 感到如此惊恐
be p_____ with 对。。耐心 be c_____ with 对。。小心（13杨浦）
make their teachers feel w_______ 使他们的老师感到担忧
think about c_____ for help 想到求助他人
be more l______ to do 更有可能做 keep his p______ 信守诺言
a_____ the world= t_______ the world 整个世界
share many life e_________ 分享很多生活经历
get into the h______ 养成习惯 are f______ with 你所熟悉的。。
do r______ on the internet 在网上做调查 be f______ for 以… 而著名
be f_____ of =be k_____ on喜爱 be a_____ with sb.对… 生气 be m____ up of 由…组成
be l_____ in/on 坐落于… be p____/s______ with 对…满意
have a s _ of public manners 有公共道德的意识 do something in e_______ 做些事作为交换
to my s_______ 让我感到惊奇的是
travel for s_______ 观光旅行
search for the a_____/k______ to the mysteries of space 寻找太空秘密的答案
上海英语教学改革篇三
乐加乐英语倾情出品
单项选择(解析老师——乐加乐英语孙晨皓)
22.a 考查人称代词
23.b 考查介词词组 from to
24.c 考查连词or
25.b 考查比较级
26.a 考察情态动词can
27.d 考查不定代词anything用于否定
28.b 考查there be句型
29.c 考查特殊疑问词用法，how often表频率
30.d 考查时态，一般将来时
31.b 考查动词不定式，ask sb to do sth
32.c 考查时态，现在完成时
33.d 考查被动语态
34.a 考查宾语从句，陈述语序
完形填空：(分析老师——乐加乐英语张澄)
答案：35-39 accdd 40-44 badbc 45-46 bd
完形文章出自美国德克萨斯周杂志 the staff，题目标题为“her name was enand she cared by reeves
as i walked down to the counselor's office, i thought to myself, “what will she be like” will she be old or young? pretty or ugly? will she care?“ oh well, i figured it didn't really matter, anyway.i'd had so many speech therapists over the years i'd lost r school, another therapist.i wondered why i even bothered to stuttering seemed to be just as much of a problem now as it always was, and besides i hated to miss did they find out that i stutter anyway? the last school must have sent my was pretty hard to hide the way i i walked down the hallway, memories popped in my head of how painful being a kid who stutters had es of how the kids used to call me ”motor mouth,“ and of the teacher who asked me if i had ”lock-jaw.“ it still hurt。
the pain welled up inside as i rounded the last corner toward the office.”don't start getting weak knees now," i whispered to myself.i wondered why i didn't stutter when i whispered, or when i talked to any rate i was sixteen years old and a junior in high schoolasking me all kinds of questions about myselfabout what i thought i did when i she began to teach me about the fundamentals of just about my speech, but about everybody'en taught me about technical things, like circumlocution(a fancy term for avoiding words).and she listened。
i sang in the choir all of my school career and was a pretty good my old school i was in the top concert choir, but when my family was transferred i learned that the new school's choir was all filled was such a disappointment.i felt like that was the one thing that i could really do wellexcept in explained that my increased fluency in therapy was because i was so relaxed, and i knew that she didn't care if i stuttered.i remember saying that i wished the whole world was a big therapy laughed!
en told me that when i left high school and went off to college that my speech would probably get worse for a was sure got considerably worse.i wondered if i would ever be able to was a very depressing time, and i often felt alone。
one day when i was feeling particularly sorry for myself, i recalled something that en had told me over and said that if i really wanted to change my speech and become more fluent that i could, but that it was all up to me.i remembered she said not to strive for perfect speech, just better was right about that, too.i eventually looked for and found another speech therapist.i began to work very hard and over the next couple of years improved my speech considerably。
a few time, when i was at home for a break from college, i tried to get in touch with her, but i never fact, i never saw or talked with her after i left high years have passed since then, and i think of her from time to time, wondering if she had as much impact on her other students as she had on me.i like to think that she did.i'll never forget name was en...and she cared。
( reeves is veterinarian who operated his own clinic in plano, city honored him by naming him businessman of the s giving of his personal time to visit with children who stutter, he also works on behalf of women and children who are victims of founded the dallas chapter of the national stuttering project in 1981, and is still active in that group).(the above article first appeared in the staff, october 1992, and appears here with permission of lee reeves-jak)
阅读理解：
a篇：cab(答案分析老师——乐加乐英语孙晨皓)
b篇：dda(答案分析老师——乐加乐英语孙晨皓)
c篇：abc(解析老师——乐加乐英语赵振宝、王志莲)
53题a：考查观点态度题。根据文章第一段“in a way that doesn’t infringe the rights of others。可知a为正确答案。cd与文章相反。b篇文章中为提到。
54题b：考查词义猜测题。根据第四段文意“在陌生人面前比在你爱的人面前更能做到 “自信”，a。 your point指的是“坚持你的观点”c.履行诺言 d。坚持斗争
55.题c：考查细节理解题。根据文章倒数第四行“make clear and direct requirements。”得知c是正确答案。
d篇：(分析教师——乐加乐英语王雨、王志莲)
56.b 这是一道细节推断题，根据全文第一句“the willful blindnessin hockey toward concussions(头部撞击)has dropped。”可知b为正确答案
57.c这是一道段落主旨题。答案提示在第2段的第一句。the change in rules should be taken as a chance to...free of danger.该句的关键词chance 对应c答案中的possible, to draw special attention to skill development in„是result ,故选c。
58.d 这是一道推断题，根据第三段最后两句话可知d表达的意思合理
59.a 这是一个全文主旨题，选best title, 答案提示0在文章最后一段，即最后一句，该句说the change sends the clearest message yet to coaches and parents that player safety is paramount in the game.变化传递了一个再清楚不过的信息，那就是球员的安全至上，这个意思对应了a 选项的important 这个意思，故选a。
还原句子：
aedb
阅读与表达：(参考答案提供教师——乐加乐英语胡赛楠)
64，yes。
65, put something soft to lie on on the floor。
66, a simple choice is to lay out a blanket in the sun。
67, by taking photos of us, our family members and friends。
68, what fun of camping is and how we have a great camping。
完成句子：(参考答案提供教师——乐加乐英语胡赛楠)
69, you'd better
70, used to
71, are looking forward to
72, as soon as i finish reading
73, won't close until
上海英语教学改革篇四
a
robot vogel is a p officer in new morning, he was drinking coffee in a ly a man ran in and shouted, “officer!a car is going down the officer vogel ran out of the restaurant and saw a car going at about 25 miles an jumped he was behind it, he turned on his red light and siren(警笛of the road and r vogel got out of his police car and looked driver was a littleseat was his littlechildren were crying.”i want my mommy!“ rocco cried.”but she can't get here, i have the car.“ then he had an idea ”just a minute,“ he told officer vogel.”i can drive.i will go to get her.“ ”no!“ officer vogel said.“you stay with me.”
officer vogel drove rocco and his sister to the police he called theirfrom thehis father was at work and his mother was rocco, and a lot of reporters went to his reporter asked rocco, “what do you want to be when you grow up?” rocco smiled “i want to be a truck driver,” he said.b
one day a man put an ad in most of the newspapers in said that he himself was a young man of ’d like toa girl to be his wife, and the girl must be like the one in books wby somerest ad was at once k by thousands of parents and young s went to shops to look for the books written by bought those books for their daughters as tried to get those books to wanted to know what kind of girl the rich and wise young man long all the books written by maugham were sout and the writer was known all over the was the rich man? it was somerest maugham who put an ad in the newspapers!the ad s, too!
c
up my first job as a students in my class were about sixteen or seventeen years old, only several years than fact, some of them looked older and seemed more like some of them even didn’t listen to me c___3__ in classroom was on the second floor and it was directly above the day, i was writing on the blackboard w____4____ i heard a sudden change in the noise behind was a man standing in the room with half an apple in his lookeda____5____
“who threw this？”he shouted, looking around the class.“i beg your pardon？”i said.“s___6_____ threw this apple out of the window.” he said,“it landed on my car.”
“who threw an apple out of the window？”i shouted to the was no a_____7___.“i want the one who threw this.” said the man, “i will be waiting outside for you.”and then he left, slamming(摔)the was silence and i went on w____8____the the end of every lesson, as the bell rang, usually the class were all gone before it finished r___9___, leaving me saying “that's all for today, ”to an empty time, when the bell went for the end of the lesson, no one m___10____.“that's all for today,”i said, “you go first, sir.”said one of the made a nice change, being first out.d
life is not you should learn to enjoy your to stay and are some ways to help you live your life more down all the good can make you as for the bad thinking of not try to with might have a bigger house or a more in your life may be very busy，you don’t have to do what o7ask you to do each er to tell your family and friends that you love can go hiking in the mountains to can make you can also go to the beach to enjoy beach new ’s always s__10___ new to a book or learn on a computer, they can open your mind to the a helping hand to is also helpful for yourselves and make them happier, and you will be the happiest of all.e
everybody has one of those days when everything goes is what h__1__ to morning, he got up very late because his clock t__2__ to shave(刮脸)quickly and cut he got dressed, he got blood all over his shirt,so he had to find a__3_ only other shirt that was clean n_4__ ironing(熨).while he was ironing it, there was a knock at the was the man to collect money for he paid the water b_5__ and showed the man out, he found the iron had burnt a hole in his he had to wear the one with the blood on it after this time it was very late, so he t_6__ he couldn’t go to work by c_7__ for a taxi to take him to another part of the town, a man had killed a woman with a knife and was s_8__ to run away in a harry’s taxi stopped outside his office, a policeman happened to be s_9__ saw the blood on harry’s shirt, and took him to the police was k__10_ till 3 o’clock the police found out that he was not the man they he finally arrived at the office at about 4 p.m., his boss took a look at him and told him to find another
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上海英语教学改革篇五
【巧夫子】2015上海中考语文作文解析
巧夫子：杨巧铃老师
2015年6月13日上午9:00-10:40，上海市一年一度的中考拉开了序幕，第一场语文卷考试，此次作文题目依然保持了历年上海中考作文的出题思路：命题式作文，即：“不止一次，我努力尝试”。同样，对于考生来言，此题目审题看似难度不大，大家肯定会想到什么努力学习突破困难之类，或者为梦想努力的过程。其实想写好，我们不必非写此类不可。如何打破思维写出深邃并富有梯度的中考作文呢？
2015年上海市中考作文题目特点解析
题目：不止一次，我努力尝试
从形式上看这是个主谓短语，若加上句号就是个句子，但是特殊的是这个句子从意义上并不完整。我们需要打开思路来进行解析。从成分上入手。
一、状语成分----不止一次
这个状语是表频率时间状语，也就是文章一定要体现多次，这个多次是围绕一个目标或境界来努力的。而且这个努力的过程中，你的认识和境界最好有层进性。
二、主语----我
主语“我”是文章主人公，要写亲身经历的的事情，所以，这个题一旦限制了，就好入手了。一定要明白，“我”不是线索人物，而是主人公。
三、谓语---“尝试”
“尝试”这个词的字典意义是“指人的一种行为、一种活动、一种精神，也是一种挑战，尝试，是做别人不敢做的事。”也就是说，是挑战。挑战自己之前没做过的行为。但是得有目的，不然，那就是没有意义了。你有什么目标？要什么发现？要了解什么„„。围绕这个点去构思。
四、状语---“努力”
这里又一个状语“努力”，直接来修饰“尝试”的，也就是说，奋力去尝试。其实表明了态度。这个过程要体现出来。
接下来，我们用我们课堂上讲过的“万象归四”法来看这类作文如何写。
“万象归四法”解析2015年上海市中考作文“不止一次，我努力尝试”
我分析过2012至2015年济南市中考作文题目解析的时候，解析过在课堂上讲过的万象归四法。当然不同的老师或学校分类也有所不同，或者按照这个思路，分类很多。有的分为6种、8种、16种等，其实，对于考生来讲，分类越多，越不容易运用和归类。那么2015年上海市中考作文题目“不止一次，我努力尝试”如何运用这四个类型实现中考作文的千变万化的无缝链接呢，实现“化万为一”呢？ 中考作文的命题方向有四大类：
1、成长感悟类
2、感恩感动类
3、励志素养类
4、审美感悟类
第一类：成长感悟
此类作品，可以结合题目“不止一次，我努力尝试”写出自己变化的。其实，成长类可以包括以下方面：
1、努力尝试：为梦想奋斗、为目标努力捅破学习方式或方法写出亲身经历的剪影
比如：你为了某个比赛，去突破学习中的障碍或心理的障碍
2、努力尝试改变自己的弱点：自卑、怯懦、任性等
比如：之前的状态是自卑的，写出你不止一次，努力几个场景，慢慢突破这个障碍的过程，然后走向乐观。
写的时候，注意重点在过程，如何努力尝试的，而不是重点在结果上，最好结果一笔带过。
深化主旨的时候，要回扣到理上来：
比如：只要有努力尝试勇气，我们可以达到目标。
第二类：感恩感动
此类作品，可以结合题目“不止一次，我努力尝试”，我们可以运用层进法来写。用层层递进的方式写出认识或理解的不同和梯度。
我们可以写亲情，这个如何立意呢？我们需要用造句法来确定
造句法：不止一次，我努力尝试解读如何让爷爷快乐，才明白什么才是真正的孝道。举例子：
爷爷退休后，一直闷闷不乐
1、我尝试买了些爷爷最爱吃的东西，他不快乐„„
2、我尝试着与爷爷聊天，关注老年人的心理，爷爷好了些，但有时还是不开心
3、我尝试着想出我们全家陪爷爷看他最爱的京剧，并通过一定渠道让爷爷参加了业余京剧社团，从此爷爷每天显得非常有精神。
主旨：什么才是孝道？孝父母之身，孝父母之心，孝父母之志，孝父母之慧„„ 这类文章需要有一定的文学和思想境界方可。第三类：励志素养
此类作文需要考生平时的思维训练，结合题目“不止一次，我努力尝试”，我们需要从自身的瓶颈入手，然后想努力尝试突破瓶颈。
举个例子：
我有一个弱点就是；受外界影响较大，然后让自己心神不宁。取得成绩时，别人的夸奖，让自己沾沾自喜，飘飘然；失败时，面对别人的否定，开始怀疑自己。如何做到“宠辱不惊”的淡泊心态呢？我开始做了努力的尝试.1、在失败时，面对别人的否定，我努力尝试学会坦然处之，开始反思自己
2、在面对别人的嫉妒时，我努力尝试保持平和心态，觉得这是另一种对自己的认可。
3、在面对别人的夸奖时，我努力尝试让它穿耳而过，摆正姿态，居安思危。
升华主旨：在一次次的努力尝试中，我获得什么才是“真豁达”！第四类：审美感悟
此类作文一般写的是文化。结合题目“不止一次，我努力尝试”，我们需要从一次次阅读经典入手，解读到经典的真谛
如：不止一次，我努力尝试发觉《西游记》的不同层次的魅力。
明清小说在文坛中达到古典小说的高峰，为什么大家认为的经典，我为什么没有发觉？为这个疑惑，不止一次，我努力尝试解读，挖掘魅力所在
1、第一遍读它，我尽力去读，只是领略了孙悟空的本领之大
2、第二次读它，我努力去品，发现了孙悟空的的成长其实是一个由自发到自觉的过程
3、第三次读它，我慢慢咀嚼，发现了：一个道理，无论是玉皇大帝、如来佛祖还是唐三藏还是孙悟空，只有坚持才能活得成功。
深化主旨：在一次次的努力尝试中，我看到经典的不同层次的魅力，看见了自己的成长轨迹。
因为近期一直上课，分析较晚，希望能给新初
一、新初
二、新初三同学一些写作启示。其实，写作也要看人生境界，记住厚德载物的道理。
（写作思路分析皆出自巧夫子巧铃老师的课堂经验，若粘贴请注明或回帖，否则必究）
我是因，世界是果！
巧夫子教育：杨巧铃老师
二0一五年六月十五日
